In regards to Tuesday's class select one paper that you have written in this semester and access it as high, middle, or low and explain why. Then explain what you can do to make that paper stronger
one paper that i wrote this semester was for my gened 104 class. we were writing about study groups. id give myself a middle on this. i do not think that i put enough time into writing this piece i think that was my major falicy. because that effected other portions of the text. whereas i am usually descriptive and paint a visual picture i lacked and did not paint an appropriate image in the mind. i had many ideas on wehat makes a study group better than working alone yet i only stated a few and didnt elaborate on what made these things better or worse than others. and finally idid not structure this paper as well as i could where as in others you could tell where the paper was going this was more all over the place. i did well with what time i put in but i could have done much better
one paper that i wrote this semester was for my gened 104 class. we were writing about study groups. id give myself a middle on this. i do not think that i put enough time into writing this piece i think that was my major falicy. because that effected other portions of the text. whereas i am usually descriptive and paint a visual picture i lacked and did not paint an appropriate image in the mind. i had many ideas on wehat makes a study group better than working alone yet i only stated a few and didnt elaborate on what made these things better or worse than others. and finally idid not structure this paper as well as i could where as in others you could tell where the paper was going this was more all over the place. i did well with what time i put in but i could have done much better
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